By Gaurav Parab
You look at me,
I look away,
I look at you,
Your eyes don’t stay.
As we slowly sip that tasteless tea,
In that big place everyone goes to,
Our tables separated by an unknown decree,
Our eyes held together by an unknown glue.
Is that a mole I see above your lip?
Or a crumb that cant let go of angel skin.
That silly hide and seek we never skip.
You know we both lose when we win.
The devil in your name,
A smile like a string of pearls.
A woman with an evil claim,
A woman amongst little girls.
You are not for the taking I can see,
But a part of me will keep on honoring
Your evil claim on me.
You look at me,
I look away,
I look at you,
Your eyes don’t stay.
As we slowly sip that tasteless tea,
In that big place everyone goes to,
Our tables separated by an unknown decree,
Our eyes held together by an unknown glue.
Is that a mole I see above your lip?
Or a crumb that cant let go of angel skin.
That silly hide and seek we never skip.
You know we both lose when we win.
The devil in your name,
A smile like a string of pearls.
A woman with an evil claim,
A woman amongst little girls.
You are not for the taking I can see,
But a part of me will keep on honoring
Your evil claim on me.
10 comments:
'You know we both lose when we win.' :) well said..
'A woman amongst little girls'..like the thought here
Seems like Love is the order of the day
Both the poems are good… Evil Claim and the last high…
Evil claim is very cute by the Gals standards ;-)
-AS
Brilliant as always!
- Manas
Appki kavita guguda gayi.. couldn’t find any right words in English J
Don’t know if it’ll make sense to guys, but touches a “woman” for sure
~AB
Wow!
AM
The poem on the whole isn’t very romantic, as you ‘probably’ intended it to be. I liked the way it ends though.
-AD
"But a part of me will keep on honoring
Your evil claim on me." Sounds Devilish....but how cute...
First 4 lines explain ll! ;)
-K
OK so I just realized that I hadn't commented on this particular one and then again in the realizations mode I realized that I hadn't commented cuz the girl you wrote this on doesn't deserve an ounce of it. Hell, with that kinda talent no girl deserves you!
-A
Love this one Gaurav
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